User:Joecool0/sandbox

Article Critique: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charlie_Kelly_(It%27s_Always_Sunny_in_Philadelphia)

Strengths: This article provides an in depth view on the character Charlie, including but not limited to his personality, likes, dislikes, occupation, hobbies, etc. Most of the descriptions in each of the sub-categories paint an accurate picture of this character and provides enough imagery for the reader to understand Charlie without seeing the show.

Weaknesses: The article is filled with a lot information that may contradict with what other viewers may think. In other words, there are some instances in the show where you are given limited information and are forced to make an assumption regarding a connection to characters, or how a certain flashback went. The information in the article not only can contradict this, but does not provide a neutral stance to the one provided.

Edits to Make: I will be making 2 edits to this article. The first edit will be adding a source to the sub-category titled "Family". This is important because Charlie's origins' are hinted throughout different points in the series. An original source would help keep track of the first occurrence of the family topic. The second edit will be rewording the introduction to the article. This will be done because it will make it easier to understand while also making it more of a neutral tone. In addition to this, sources will be provided to note where these traits of Charlie can be seen.