User:Joelauria316/Onondaga County Justice Center/Jacook15 Peer Review

General info
Joelauria316, AntonioVLCruz
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Joelauria316/Onondaga County Justice Center
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Onondaga County Justice Center

Evaluate the drafted changes
First, I would reccomend getting the page published. The draft is very detailed, so I think it's ready to go live.

What is "state of the art technology"? Also, if the prison was designed in 1995, is the technology state of the art to 1995 or 2024?

The detail around the solitary confinement changes is very well-organized, and I think you can highlight this more with some examples of certain cases that raised the public awareness of the solitary confinement of minors.

I like that you take the future into account, considering how the closure of the justice center could affect both the inmates and other correctional facilities in the area.

It's important that you cited specific medical tragedies and deaths at the facility because it helps tell the story of those incarcerated from an unbiased view, telling the facts of what people said and the timeline of the events. The quotes of suicide victims shows an especially vital view into life inside the prison.

Lastly, are there any more recent reports that detail how the healthcare inside the facility functions? A lot can change in five years, but it can also stay the same. A 2019 report does not tell us what the conditions look and feel like right now.