User:JoelyB/Television comedy/Oleena.H Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? JoelyB
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Television comedy

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? yes
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? yes there are add ons to the original that made it better
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? it was actually concise

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? yes they were
 * Is the content added up-to-date? yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? no

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? no
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? they were balanced out
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? no it was a neutral paper that i really liked reading

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? yes they are
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? yes
 * Are the sources current? yes they are
 * Check a few links. Do they work? yes they do

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? it is concise and easy to read
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? I didn't find this article to have any errors.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? yes it is very well broken down and does reflect the major points of the topic

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? yes it does
 * Are images well-captioned?it is very well captioned
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? yes they do
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? yes

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? yes it is very much complete
 * What are the strengths of the content added? adding more information to an article that barely had any
 * How can the content added be improved? it seems as if everything is better than the original