User:Joerogansavedmylife/Maud Martha/Callencamp Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

joerogansavedmylife


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Joerogansavedmylife/Maud_Martha?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Maud_Martha&action=history

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Great job! You've added some really great facts about the novel. I see that you've also restructured some things and added citations which is also very helpful. I would see if you could find more information for the Reception section. Also, to add more to the page you could add a character section and a themes section. Also, see where you can add more links to the page to add to its notability. Amazing that there is a picture on it! Good objective language. For the sentence in the reception section you could re word to say maybe: "In a review for the novel from NPR, Asali Solomon says..." or something like that. Great work so far!