User:JoeyCalzo/Brand Engagement/Magnificent Mind Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JoeyCalzo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JoeyCalzo/Brand Engagement - No draft available in sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Brand engagement
 * Brand engagement

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Joey, I could not find your draft in the sandbox provided however, looking at the Brand engagement current version I have a few tips you may include if you have not done so.

Introduction: The introduction is very short, but it does give the reader a slight idea of what what brand engagement is. You can add more content by adding more information on what other components impact brand engagement. You can also look at this form a more global perspective.

In the subheading you can also explore how brand engagement changes form culture to culture whilst doing this it is important to remember to have a balanced and neutral view on how it changed form culture to culture.

Citations: The article also lacks citations. I saw your bibliography sandbox and I think you have decent sources that you can incorporate within the article.