User:JoeyD Valle/Neurexin/Novafields Peer Review

General info
JoeyD Valle
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JoeyD%20Valle/Neurexin?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Neurexin

Evaluate the drafted changes
There's some great, detailed information here! Nice work on that research. I do think it is a little more scholarly than necessary for a wiki article. For me, I had to turn on my "sciency school mode" brain to understand it, which isn't inherently bad! I just think it could be trimmed up and simplified a bit to read more smoothly for the average reader. To help with this, you could add links to other wiki pages for terms that may need further explaining in order to understand the topic (eg. CASK, PSD95, PDZ domains, isoforms, alternative splicing, any of the advanced vocab). That way, you don't have to explain every term as well.

An image/diagram showing binding between Neurexins, neuroligin, CADK, and PSD95 would be very helpful!

Need references for larger paragraph! Also, it seems like the references in the smaller additions on the bottom weren't added correctly. Make sure the links work!Novafields (talk) 18:52, 8 November 2023 (UTC)

Second Peer Review
I think it's going great! The main paragraph is detailed and has a professional tone, without being too wordy. No new comments for what to improve. So, adding links to other wiki pages and an image/diagram of neurexin/neurologin are what I'd recommend.Novafields (talk) 04:47, 30 November 2023 (UTC)