User:Joeybrown8/Hydropsychidae/Wildlife Nerd8694 Peer Review

General info
JoeyBrown8
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Joeybrown8/Hydropsychidae
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hydropsychidae

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overview;

Improvements: This section that you have typed in for improvements is a lot of really good information that will work great with the pre-existent wikipedia article on hydropsychidae, the only issue with it is that it's all in quotes. You should probably take the time to break down all of the information given to review and reword it so you're not flagged for plagiarism. I may have misunderstood the plagiarism module we worked through but as far as I can remember any large amounts of quotes in an article will get flagged. Not to say that it isn't good information of course! Just some rewording and a healthy bibliography will polish it.

Environmental indicators[edit]: If you don't remember how to you might want to review previous modules on article editing to figure out how to add in-text citations rather than type them out. That way it will tack on a little number at the end of your sentence that refers to a completed bibliography. Also the information you have provided is really great, it just might need some editing to flow better for your intended purposes. Maybe rewrite the title of "Environmental Indicators" or rework the order that the information flows in so its better understood that this species have such strong standards of living that their existence indicates to these specific environments.