User:Joh19094/Beggiatoa/VishalliAlagappan Peer Review

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Joh19094
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Beggiatoa
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The lead was not changed

As far as content goes I think it can be a bit clearer in some spots. What is mol%? What are necridia cells? Do all beggiatoa species have motility? I also wonder if you can make it a bit more of a general claim in the genetics section because the you talk about the results of one specific paper on genes that confirm its metabolic capacity. I would try to look for another similar source so you can make it applicable to more than just that one strain of Beggiatoa.

Tone seems neutral and unbiased.

I looked at the sources added to the article itself and the material you have seems unplagiarized and accurate. Needs more citations in certain places (I see that you marked them "citation needed")

"A variable number of further membranes that cover the peptidoglycan layer are sometimes present" For clarity, I would remove the underline word.

Good organization and no images were added.

Great work so far! Just some minor tweaks and make sure to get all your citations on the article!