User:Joh19171/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Whisk (ballroom dance)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I do not know anything about this subject. I figured that the best article for an evaluation would be one that would give me an immediate first impression, rather than one in which I already have some knowledge on.

Evaluate the article
The lead paragraph is concise and comprehensible. It becomes more descriptive as it goes on without being overbearing. Each section is given the same amount of attention and there is no intrusion of bias. Overall, there is only necessary and neutral content in the article. There are only two sources for this article, and neither of them are peer-reviewed. To better the credibility of this article, it would be best to find peer-reviewed scholarly articles to cite. There are no images in this article, but there are graphs to show the variability of this dance move. It would be better to have both images and these graphs. This is generally good article, but it could be improved in its sources and images.