User:Joh19171/Salome (Titian, Rome)/Nycgirl00 Peer Review

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Hi @John19171,
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I really like the article you have chosen, and I think there is a lot of good information regarding the "Salome" painting. I do not have many critiques for you, as you seem to be doing a great job! Here are a few suggestions:

Lead: Your lead is compelling, however, I would polish the 2nd and 3rd sentences to make them sound more certain. You start both the second and third sentence with "It is usually..." - this is a bit repetitive. I would change this.

Context: You present great context! I am impressed. Again, I would try to adjust your tone to sound more confident. You use the word "probably" a lot. Also, capitalize the "d" in your header, "Attribution and d ate".

Sources: Add more sources.

Organization: This article is well organized. However, you do not need both a "Versions" and "Other compositions of Salome and Judith" section. You can combine these two.

Images: No need to add any other pictures besides from the painting itself.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Salome (Titian, Rome)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Salome (Titian, Rome)