User:JohRog/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Rocketman (film) - Wikipedia

Why have you chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose Rocketman to evaluate because I am a fan of Elton John, so I thought it would be interesting to review the movie that was based on him. My preliminary impression of the article was that it seemed relatively organized.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Lead Section: Every section within the article is labelled and has correct and relevant information. As expected, the article addresses the standard expectations, which are plot, cast, and soundtrack, but also a few other informative sections such as censorship and historical accuracy. A missing piece of information is in the censorship section. It addresses that Delta Air Lines had apparently censored a few scenes of the movie. Delta Airlines responded saying they supported diversity and would look into why the censorship occurred as homosexuality does not go against the Delta content parameters. That is where it ends, and no information is provided as to why it was censored or if any of the scenes were added back in.

Tone and Balance: Nothing in the article is biased and is presented fairly.

Sources and References: There are 101 references for the article with working links to both the source and to a Wikipedia page about the organization that published the information. There are a variety of publishers such as Box Office Mojo, The Hollywood Reporter, Guardian, and Screen International.

Organization and Writing Quality: Each section is organized appropriately, stays focused on the section's label, and is clearly written with no visible grammar mistakes.

Images and Media: There are three images on the page. The first picture is the United States theatrical release poster while the other two pictures are focused on identifying the actors.

Talk Page Discussion: The Talk Page provides a brief discussion labelled with seven sections. Questions and suggestions are provided with the genre be questioned and the length of the plot section is asked to be shorten.

Overall Impression: I am fairly impressed with the information provided but I feel the section focusing on reception should provide a clearer view of the outcome of what happened and how censorship was dealt with.