User:Johenn11/Gemmatimonas groenlandica/AlexKurtt Peer Review

General info
Johenn11
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Johenn11/Gemmatimonas groenlandica
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Gemmatimonas groenlandica

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I like the information that has been presented. It feels a little sparse which might be due to a lack of sources available, but I think if you combine some of the lines of text into one larger paragraph, it would read easier. If possible, another source would be a great addition to help add a little more background to this species. Also, a picture would be great to add visual interest if one is available.