User:John.gross0864/Lake Plainview/Everhartnr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

john.gross0864


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:John.gross0864/Lake Plainview - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The introduction was strong and gave intent to the article. The paragraph needs to be restructured. It seemed to have a few grammatical errors that needed to be smoothed over. There could be more information of the micro/macro fauna/flora found in the lake. It did not seem like there was a whole lot of information to review. The sources are current and are placed in the correct spots throughout the article.

It might help with the layout and flow if it were separated into sections. Otherwise, I think this is a great start to your article.