User:John.heuver/1985 Algarrobo earthquake/Olivia-felton Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) John.heuver


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:John.heuver/1985_Algarrobo_earthquake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1985 Algarrobo earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There is no link for your first citation, although I was able to open the others. Since this specific article doesn't contain much information, I suggest finding eye-witnesses (if there are any). I think finding supporting quotes would be a good addition. It seems like your'e on the right track when discussing more geographical aspects. I'd research more information about the seismological data, as stated in your article evaluation. Also, the chart states information about refugees and non-refugees, another idea is having a small history section with your background information, this way readers can understand the setting of the earthquake more. Overall, the article is underrepresented with information such as aftershocks, or foreshocks, the cost of rebuilding or any detail like such. Another idea, is discussing the following topics, especially the cost of how much because with your research it seems like it had a lot of deaths/casualties/damages. I advice to dig into the damages of man-made structures as well such as brick buildings.

Marvins Reply
Thank you for the clarification on my first citation, I did not notice that my citation did not work. I think finding information on the seismological data and eye witness accounts would make the article more interesting and more knowledgable for the readers. I will have to add information such as aftershocks and the impact that the quake had on the city, thank you for the reply.