User:John.waswill/Flying and gliding animals/ThatsCrazey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

John.waswill


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:John.waswill/Flying_and_gliding_animals?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Flying and gliding animals

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content:

Content is very relevant to the topic pertaining to the physiology and evolution of flight and gliding.

Most content is from sources published in the last decade so the information is very current and up to date.

Tone and Balance:

Tone is neutral, but I felt that portions of the article were very scientific in nature, and might not be reader-friendly to others. I might recommend adding hyperlinks to other Wikipedia pages to help inform the reader about the more uncommon verbiage.

Nothing jumped out as being biased or coming from a particular angle.

There wasn't an overwhelming amount of information coming from one source and the length of each section is about equal as well. Overall balance is good.

Sources and References:

As mentioned earlier, sources are all current and come from credible scientific journals.

There is a diverse mix of sources and authors.

Don't be afraid to add multiple citations to a statement if it's supported by more than one source!

Just about all your information had a source tag tied to it, save the one I've mentioned below/


 * "The process of gliding happens in 5 steps being preparation, launch, glide, braking, and landing in order for a successful flight." - When making a declarative statement like this, you would probably need a source since it isn't common knowledge.

Organization:

Organization makes sense. It's interesting how you've added your words onto existing sentences and expanding already established sections in the article.

For the most part, your grammar is good but there was one spot where I felt what you were communicating wasn't clear. Maybe it's just me but I've added it below here.


 * "The process of gliding happens in 5 steps being preparation, launch, glide, braking, and landing in order for a successful flight." - Adding this in again because the sentence structure doesn't make complete sense. I understand what you're trying to communicate but the sentence reads funny. I would recommend saying something like "Successful flights for gliding animals are achieved through 5 steps: preparation, launch, glide, braking, and landing."

Overall Impressions:

Overall, the article contributions are high-quality, being backed by reliable research sources and credible journals.

I think the biggest strength of your article is the section about the evolution of gliding and flight. There's a lot of good information about that subject and you did a nice job including all your major findings.