User:JohnFrum1441/Mormon colonies in Mexico/Oliver darmody Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * JohnFrum1441


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JohnFrum1441/Mormon colonies in Mexico
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mormon colonies in Mexico

Evaluate the drafted changes
The proposed changes are an excellent draft. The sources used, tone, and overall content of the information written all seem to be in line with Wikipedia’s guidelines. I especially appreciate the flow of the article and the amount of information contained in a short space. Moving forward, naturally, adding the section on the contributions of the colonies should be prioritized. I do not have any immediate suggestions on anything that needs to be changed in the current draft. Adding the next section and any additional sources that are utilized will result in a great final draft.