User:JohnMelodyy/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Design studies

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this page because design, specifically graphic design, genuinely interests me. Design studies matter because they cover how we react to things that we see everyday in our lives. My preliminary impression was still that of genuine interest and curiosity.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is great and gets to the point. It is a bit on the shorter side, but this article is covering a pretty simple concept rather than anything too complex or abstract. It gets to the point, which is much appreciated. I do think it can use description to talk about further sections, but that's just because that is what's listed as a key aspect that I notice it is missing. Personally, I don't mind it. The content is great when it comes to giving a history over the design study, and including foundational figures was a great touch. The tone felt neutral, and I didn't sense any bias anywhere. I think my only big critique would be the same that any toddler would have, and that is the article needs more pictures. Just at a glance, it seems too boring, but even from a writer's standpoint, having visuals helps out with maintaining attention from readers and what not. Reading some notes on the talk page opened my eyes to some things I didn't think were problems, but then again, these people leaving notes seem to have more experience on this website. Overall, I didn't mind the content, and I did find it informational, but that's just me.