User:John ricciardelli Jr./Exploitation film/Takeyce Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

John ricciardelli Jr.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:John%20ricciardelli%20Jr./Exploitation_film?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Exploitation film

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi John. I think your changes so far are good additions to the article. I would be careful with the tone of your changes - you should be neutral, but this statement seems like conjecture not fact: "While parents were working teenagers were spending their parents' money going to the movies to see exploitations (sic) movies." Please double check for typos as I saw one or two in your draft. I would also add links to your sources in the references section. I like the addition of the image of the "White Zombie". Do you have a reference to affirm it being the first movie with the title "Zombie"?