User:Johnduffy23/Military communications/Bandile Masilela Peer Review

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The article provides a comprehensive overview of military communications, its importance, and its evolution over time. It does well to highlight the two main categories of military communication, both tactical and strategic, and the role of communication in fostering social cohesion among military personnel. The article also does well in citing relevant communication theories such as social exchange theory and social identity theory, and provides examples of how they can be applied in the military context.

The article could use more subheadings to divide up the content in a way that helps separate the content and make it easier for a reader to follow.