User:Johnskad/Plasma membrane monoamine transporter/OtherwiseDrummer Peer Review

General info
Johnskad
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Plasma membrane monoamine transporter

Small notes
In your contributions you have a couple titles with a colon (ie. Transport function:, or Structure:) I would turn these into the preset bolded subheadings for clarity.

I might soften a few phrases like "plays a key role," "likely has a significant impact," or "shows promising results" to more neutral language (unless the research backing those statements is really solid, then ignore this comment)

Overall vibes
Your sources look good. I assume you'll expand the Parkinson's and GI sections as you continue drafting. I might also expand the depression section a little more, but I assume you may also have plans for that. I don't see any glaring large issues with structure or comprehension so great job!

Lead
The content you added seems great

Content
Everything you added seems useful and up to date

Small notes:

I think it's unnecessary to make comments like "in a 2022 paper" you could just say "PMAT is differentially expressed" and add a reference.

Overall
Everything seems really great I'm impressed!