User:Johnwinston96/Electric chair/Ashleykacou11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Johnwinston96)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Johnwinston96/Electric_chair?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&action=edit&section=3


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Electric chair

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer review:

I think you did a great job in contributing good references and also a great introduction to a section in your original article.

n the sandbox draft, I noticed that their rough draft lead added a new contribution to the article. Their contribution focused on the actual preparation of the execution, rather than just what it originated from...which the main article focuses heavily on. It was interesting to read the kind of “ins and outs,” of the electric chair and how it operates through the prison.

Relevant?

I believe this content is extremely relevant in regards to the main topic of the article.

It is brief, but I can see how this is a good starting point to a full draft. The references added to the draft were very relevant and resourceful to the main topic. The links and references are not biased and they actually give a central idea of the topic, rather than leaning towards one side of the argument. The draft added some new information in regards to the status of the use of the electric chair.

I believe this is a good start to a more in depth draft, I would've liked to see more interesting unknown facts in regards to the electric chair. I believe this could be a great addition to your draft and might be fun researching on your end as well. The references you placed all work and all connect to the main topic, so I am interested to see how you utilize this information.

There are not many grammatical errors, and also the original article you are editing has a lot of information, so it was great to see you pull in something new. I believe this content can improve the article, especially once you start really pulling information from the references you inserted in the sandbox.