User:Jojobruin24/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Judy Chicago

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because Judy Chicago is an inspiring feminist artist who deserves widespread recognition. My preliminary impression of the article is that it appears to be very thorough and well constructed.

Evaluate the article
The lead section does a good job of introducing Judy Chicago and seems to connect to the subsequent sections of the article, however, it is quite lengthy and could possibly be edited down a bit. The content is fairly balanced, yet the portion about the 1970’s is definitely given much more weight than the meager section dedicated to both the 80’s and 90’s. The article does appear to do quite well in maintaining a balanced tone, simply describing her life and works. There is a wide variety of respectable citations to back up the article. There could be more images of her art alongside their descriptions, as there is only 3 photos in the entire article (not including photo of the artist) yet at least 5 pieces are mentioned in detail. There is some activity on the talk page suggesting alternate sources, and the article is rated as a level 5 vital article for people, artists; and is C class for content. Overall the article is very thorough and informative, yet there are sections which could be made more concise and others which can be expanded upon further.