User:Jojoc1/Autism spectrum/Yh2256 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jojoc1, Ebeutter


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Autism spectrum
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is very well-organized and provides valuable information for individuals looking to deepen their understanding about this topic.

For the diagnosis section, I would recommend a minor edit of the first sentence to shorten it. I suggest "Autism Spectrum Disorder is a clinical diagnosis that is typically made by a physician..."

I thought it was great to mention that symptoms of ASD must be differentiated from intellectual developmental disorder and global developmental delay. I would include a brief description of IDD and GDD or add hyperlinks to those pages for individuals who may not be familiar with them.

Listing the challenges of ASD diagnosis was a great addition to this article! I wonder if these challenges lead to under-diagnoses of autism and if that information could be added to this section.

The section discussing ASD in the context of low and middle income countries was an essential addition! if possible, consider including how management plans vary between high-income countries and LMIC beyond intervention times.

Overall, the information added to this article was well-incorporated and adds to the existing collection of knowledge on this page.

Great job!