User:Jojoc1/Autism spectrum/YummyPanda Peer Review

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Overall, I appreciate the contributions added to this page. I especially like the additions to discussion of how ASD is diagnosed, and how it is primarily a clinical diagnosis made by multi-disciplinary specialists with expert training in pediatrics and/or psychiatry / neurology. To further develop this section, it would be interesting to further explore what new genetic / laboratory / imaging tests are being developed in order to assist in a diagnosis of ASD. For instance, new genes are being associated with ASD (https://www.sfari.org/resource/sfari-gene/) and these genes could be screened for in newly diagnosed individuals in order to better understand the etiology of the disorder.

I also appreciate the references to how ASD is diagnosed and managed in low-middle resource countries. It would be interesting to do a review of how schooling systems / medical systems in those countries provide care for individuals diagnosed with ASD.

Great work!