User:Jojoleibold

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Bio

Hello, my name is Jonas and I am a college student. Some things about me are that I have bipolar disorder and that I am a extremely tolerant person. Throughout my life I have dealt with mood swings that at times make me go suicidal or super hyper and happy. Teachers through my life have noticed my behavior and attempted to communicate to me signs of my disorder to help me and I was too embarrassed to admit that I have a mental disorder. I thought that women would not want to talk to me or men would not want to be friends with me. It took me staring at my ceiling for days and going extremely delusional where I thought a movie was being made about me to realize that I need help. I received bipolar medication about a year and a half ago to keep me sane in order to counteract my mental condition of mood fluctuations. Despite my disorder I have always been very tolerant of other people whether I have been happy or sad which is rare for my condition. I have learned over time that me feeling more emotions than most people only makes me more human and a more loveable person. Now I accept that I am too emotional for my own good, I am bipolar.

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Wiki interests

My interest in Wikipedia are in correlation to world issues or world potential whether it is conflicts in the middle-east or national oil reserves. I want to know what makes people turn against their brothers or what makes nations mad at each other? How can oil prices drop or exponentially increase? The reason that I care so much is because these issues can affect us in our lives. If Russia invades Ukraine we have to pay for it in billions of tax dollars just to lead to more lives destroyed through missiles or bullets. If Rwanda has another genocide peacekeepers will get deployed and then they will die by the machetes of the Rwandans. If Venezuela never utilizes their oil reserves how will gas become cheaper? These issues matter. Our economy is our people, death destroys our economy.

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Wiki interests

Throughout the 2000's one card game stood up above all and that game was yu-gi-oh. What fascinates me the most about this game is the multi-million dollar card market that has a economy of its own. I visited the Yu-Gi-Oh! - Wikipedia article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: is the article up to date, are there irrelevant sections or sentences, and are there grammar errors, or informal language?

The Yu-Gi-Oh article is very up to date with edits made every month just about. There have been edits made spanning in the hundreds. The last date edited was December 10th which was a little over a month ago. What makes this even more surprising is the fact that the article is only about a page long leaving very little room for edits to be made. The article even shows the newer movies released much after the initial series run date during the 90's. A example I could give is The Pyramid Of Light Movie which was released in 2004 indicating a very modern list of edits. I would say that the number of revisions made have been extremely substantial.

The Yu-Gi-Oh! - Wikipedia article again does not span long so there are not many irrelevant sections however, there were mistakes. One mistake I found is plural word usage for simply the card game yu-gi-oh. The term "various games" is incorrect because almost every episode of the series shows one card game played. "The plot follows the story of a boy named Yugi Mutou, who solves the ancient Millennium Puzzle. Yugi awakens a gambling alter-ego or spirit within his body that solves his conflicts using various games." The article overall is very accurate with a major list of edits made.

The yu-gi-oh article has some examples of incorrect grammar found within it. One example of grammar errors is the term lets battle being used or lets fight being used instead of let's duel which in every instance of the series is used. "Takahashi decided to use "battle" as his primary theme. Since there had been so much "fighting" manga, he found it difficult to come up with something original. He decided to create a fighting manga where the main character does not hit anybody, but also struggled with that limitation. When the word "game" came to mind, he found it much easier to work with." The article is very correct overall in grammar due to the game being so popular with thousands of yu-gi-oh freaks on the internet editing this article. I would give the grammar a A+ and very formal language is used as expected.

This article has been amazing to read as I feel I am being sent back to my childhood, the accuracy in every aspect just about has been astonishing. There were very small errors made and there is some information worth adding but that is to be expected from almost every article. You are set and ready to overcome the challenge ahead of you as you pull out your deck of cards out along with the enemy ahead of you there is only one thing you have left to say, "lets duel".

Mayo Clinic published "Bipolar Disorder- Symptoms And Causes" which is a article about bipolar disorder and I quote directly. "Bipolar disorder, formerly called manic depression, is a mental health condition that causes extreme mood swings that include emotional highs (mania or hypomania) and lows (depression). When you become depressed, you may feel sad or hopeless and lose interest or pleasure in most activities. When your mood shifts to mania or hypomania (less extreme than mania), you may feel euphoric, full of energy or unusually irritable. These mood swings can affect sleep, energy, activity, judgment, behavior and the ability to think clearly." In other words, bipolar disorder can really impact your life if the condition becomes severe as time goes on.