User:Jolly315/Central Valley (California)/Cpediav Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jolly315


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jolly315/Central Valley (California)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Jolly315/Central Valley (California)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Joanne's work on Oral health in the Central Valley thus far is very informative. Her writing is free of any biases or charged words and simply provides factual evidence. Additionally, she has included a comprehensive list of resources that she used for easy referencing.