User:Jonathan D12/Third Philippic/Wartracjunior Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Johathan D12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Elsaskinner/Against_Leptines?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Third Philippic

Evaluate the drafted changes
Based on your reading I would say there is only a few things I would change. 1 add more to the main paragraphs of the page it seems they are lacking a little detail. 2 I would add more sources to further read about the topic. There could be more there for readers of the page.