User:Jonathan Kvech/Ickey Shuffle/Pjuan8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: Jonathan Kvech/Ickey Shuffle


 * Link to draft you're reviewing

User:Jonathan Kvech/Ickey Shuffle


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Ickey Shuffle

Lead
The lead is concise and explains what the article topic is about, however, there has been no updates to reflect the work that has been done on the rest of the article.

Content
From my comparisons between the current published article and the drafted article, the added content was the origin and media sections. Both sections were relevant to the article topic, with how the dance came about and where it can be seen in the media. The content does appear to be up-to-date and does not talk about underrepresented populations or topics.

Tone and Balance
The content that was added seemed to be neutral and does not include any bias or opinionated sections. All of the content appears to be equally represented, without the attempt to persuade the reader to favor one position over the other.

Sources and References
A few of the sources that were referenced were recent and the information added in the article did reflect what the sources mentioned. Some of the sources referenced youtube videos that showcased where the dance was mentioned. Based on the information presented in the article, I feel that there would be no peer-reviewed articles that would assist in strengthening this draft.

Organization
The organization was easy to follow and clear to read. There was little to no grammatical or spelling errors that needed to be fixed. The article was broken down to two major sections that focused solely on the article topic.

Images and Media
I feel there there could be images of when the dance was used, whether from a game or from the media that was presented in the article.

New Article
N/A

Overall Impression
I felt the article was short, but interesting to read. If it were not for this article, I would not have known what this dance was called. One suggestion would be to add images which can make the article a little more interesting to read.