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Borrelia
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Borrelia burgdorferi
 * This article seems to be pretty far along. It does need a bit more scientific classifications and terms that would be helpful for its data. I found that the kingdom was bacteria, the phylum/class/order/family was scpirochaetales, and the genus is borrelia. Most of its sections could be expanded on, especially the molecular pathogenesis section with a description. It can be concluded that this type of infection is able to change the expression of various adhesion molecules on many different kinds of cells. It was found that this disease doesn't make any kind of toxins nor harbor lipopolysaccharides. It was found that they have many kinds of lipoproteins that have relation to arthritis.
 * Sources... Borrelia burgdorferi ; http://www.dsmz.de/bacterial-diversity/bacterial-nomenclature-up-to-date.html; https://www.sciencedirect.com/topics/immunology-and-microbiology/borrelia-burgdorferi; Encyclopedia of Microbiology (Fourth Edition), 2019

Option 2

 * Borrelia
 * This article has a lot of general information and has good sourcing. It has many important sections already started such as introduction, species, biology, and the many vectors (ticks, Lyme disease, illnesses the follow, diagnosis, etc.). It could use a bit more scientific classifications and terms that would be helpful for the article. I found that the kingdom was bacteria, the phylum/class/order/family was scpirochaetales, and the genus is borreliaI. I believe more types of strain information may be helpful. I was able to find information containing the types of strains that are known as borrelia. Also how this kind of bacteria can be identified may help. I found it can be identified from laboratory isolation, an examination of the agent, or a diagnostic change within the antibodies specific to the agent.
 * Sources... Borrelia; https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC154584/; https://igenex.com/tick-talk/an-overview-of-the-types-of-borrelia-that-cause-lyme-disease/; https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3327992/