User:Jondya Jar/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Robert Koch

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article to evaluate because it was a familiar name that I discovered under the microbiology section in the C-class rated by section. This article fit all the criteria that was needed, and Koch was an important name in our studies. My preliminary impression of the article was that is has some basic things, but needs quite a bit more help.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section: This article could use some more structuring to help the introduction be a bit more practical. There is a lot of links in the introduction and details that lead away from the main idea of the article.

Content: This seems to be a bit all over the place and could use some organizing. There is a lot of gaps throughout some sections while others are overflowing with information.

Tone & Balance: This area seems to be neutral and unbiased. I believe more official wordage could help in this area.

Sources & References: There is quite a bit of this and everything seems to be sourced/referenced correctly.

Organization & Writing Quality: Seems to be fairly organized well, and has subtitles for the sections. The writing quality seems good, but in some areas needs some touching up.

Images & Media: There is a few images/media that I found that seem to be relative to the topic discussed.

Talk page discussion: There is a ton of talk page discussion. Some seem less professional than others, but overall they seem good.

Overall Impressions: This article has lots of information within it. The article needs more information to fill some gaps and have a consistent amount of information each section. Seems to be a decent article, but could improve with a few changes.