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1."Lots of stars for archery's return at Commonwealth Games". World Archery Federation. Archived from the original on 9 December 2013.

2.Towns, John (17 July 2010). "'Darling' Doris makes national archery team". Interlake Today. Archived from the original on 9 December 2013.

3.Hall, M. Ann (2012). "Toward a History of Aboriginal Women in Canadian Sport". In Forsyth, Janice; Giles, Audrey R. Aboriginal Peoples and Sport in Canada: Historical Foundations and Contemporary Issues. Vancouver, British Columbia: UBC Press. p. 85. ISBN 978-0-7748-2423-1.

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6."BBC Sport - Commonwealth Games 2010: England win archery medals". news.bbc.co.uk. Retrieved 2017-03-24.

Suggestions for Improving the Article
1.Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference?

So far, almost every reference is reliable except for three of the following:

-"Canada and India in Compound, Korea and France in Recurve". World Archery Federation. 21 October 2006. Archived from the original on 9 December 2013.

-"Doris Jones wins Silver Medal for Canada in Commonwealth Games Archery". India: The Sports Campus. 9 October 2010. Archived from the original on 9 December 2013.

-"Archery | XIX Commonwealth Games 2010 Delhi". d2010.thecgf.com. Retrieved 2017-03-24.

The first reference is hard to read because the format of the website is not working properly and is not a relevant or appropriate source for the article. The second reference does not directly work to the following information, it is an indirect source that just needs to be edited with a direct website source. Lastly, for the third reverence, the link does not work anymore, and more research is needed to cover the information provided from the website that does not work, with a new source.

2.Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?

There is no information out of date, however, because this article is considered a Stub-Class article, editing and additional materials are highly recommended. That means, there is a lot of information that can be provided for Doris Jones, and more research is required to make her page more significant. For example, adding more about her home life or earlier years may be helpful for others when reading her page so they can learn more about how Doris grew up and her background of being an Aboriginal athlete.

3.Check a few citations. Do the links work? Is there any close paraphrasing or plagiarism in the article?

There is no plagiarism, every quote or information is properly cited. However, there are three resources provided that do not work properly, and there for the information that is provided from these citations are no longer relevant. In order to make the information that is no longer relevant significant, more research needs to be done based off of Doris’ past gold medal wins, early life, and where she is today.

Jones14u (talk) 17:30, 18 March 2018 (UTC)

Additions to the Article
1. Doris won three world championships and set many Canadian and world records. In 2006, she won the Tom Longboat Award as Canada's top Aboriginal female athlete. Jones took top honours at the World Archery Festival held in Las Vegas, winning gold in February of 2006. As well, she won a gold medal at the world juniors in Mérida, Mexico in October of the same year.

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 * Doris won in the quarterfinals, 6-0, against Janette Howells (WAL).
 * She won in the semi-finals, 7-3, against Cassie McCall (AUS).
 * Nicky Hunt (ENG) beat Doris 4-6 in the finals.

3. After the 2010 Commonwealth Games, due to a lack of funding, Doris could not continue her archery career. The cost of travel and no support or sponsorships made it difficult to continue in competitions.