User:JonesGMorg/Scarcity (social psychology)/Casseygray Peer Review

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JonesGMorg
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 * User:JonesGMorg/Scarcity (social psychology)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD

The lead paragraph is larger than most lead paragraphs, however it is very informative. It has links that seem to work pretty well. Maybe condense the information to one paragraph that is a few sentences of well written information and not as expounded.

CONTENT

The content paragraphs are well organized, however I believe there can be more information added than there is. For example, there is an example section in which there can be more information put in there. There can also be more examples added.

TONE AND BALANCE

Some instances seem to slightly deviate from neutrality, such as in the lead paragraph, however overall it seems to stay pretty neutral.

SOURCE AND REFERENCES

You have added a source to the page, maybe add a few more?

ORGANIZATION

It is organized pretty well. It is easy to follow and read, and it flows very nicely.

MEDIA

There are two pictures that I think make sense with the topic, such as the one depicting the lack of toilet paper during covid.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS

maybe begin adding some more information to the lead paragraph, content, etc.