User:Jonesks4/Influence of childhood trauma in psychopathy/Hogebasj Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jonesks4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jonesks4/Influence_of_childhood_trauma_in_psychopathy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Influence of childhood trauma in psychopathy

Evaluate the drafted changes
"Proposals to add: Psychopathy is a personality disorder of affective, interpersonal, and behavioral dimensions that begin in childhood and manifest as aggressive actions in early or late adolescence. Childhood trauma affects vulnerability to different forms of psychopathology and traits associated with it. Disinhibition mediates the relationship between physical abuse and two components of psychopathy. Sexual abuse is directly correlated with the social deviation factor, and physical abuse is directly correlated with the affective interpersonal factor. Gender differences have also been observed in psychopathy. For example, psychopathic antisocial personality traits are more noticeable in males while histrionic personality traits are more evident in females. In addition, women are more likely to experience internalizing psychopathology than men"

Proposed changes:


 * 1) "Psychopathy is a personality disorder of affective, interpersonal, and behavioral dimensions that begins in childhood and manifests as aggressive actions in early or late adolescence"
 * 2) "Childhood trauma affects vulnerability to different forms of psychopathology."
 * 3) "Disinhibition mediates the relationship between physical abuse and two components of psychopathy(state the two components).
 * 4) " Gender differences have also been observed in psychopathy. For example, psychopathic antisocial personality traits are more noticeable in males while histrionic personality traits are more evident in females. In addition, women are more likely to experience internalizing psychopathology than men" add cited statics here instead of just statements