User:Jonnykoz/Barcelona/Jaylea.wirth.uwyo Peer Review

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Jonnykoz
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Evaluate the drafted changes
For Jonny's article I saw he added to 6 different add ons to the already placed information, that includes the citations. After reading through the edits and evaluating the work I feel the student worked well with what was already there and allowed everything to flow together with easy to read sentences. Most of work they added was recent information for 2023 other than the urbanization of the 1850's. Everything put is was new and worth knowing. The work was strong in the flow of words and not adding too much but also adding enough to provide well done new information for the readers. I personally don't see any needed improvements on the work as they added a fair amount to the article.