User:Joq Oliver/Deep sea mining/Nidazia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Joq Oliver


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Deep sea mining
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Deep sea mining

Evaluate the drafted changes
- It has been updated by my peer to reflect the new content. It includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic. It could use a brief descriptions of the article's major sections as well as at the beginning of each section. The lead is concise.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * The content added is relevant to the topic and up to date.
 * It does not deal with Wikipedia's equity gaps

Tone and Balance
The tone is completely neutral and appropriate

Sources and References

 * The links are working and the sources are credible

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * The grammar is good and the article is concise.
 * It would be helpful to have an introductory sentence at the beginning of each paragraph/section.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * No images

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * The content is very useful and informative. Overall, it is very well written.