User:Jordan.bush910/sandbox

Completed project
I have finished making the edits to the wikipedia pages that I chose.

Injury:

I read through the lists of injuries and analyzed the organization of the page. The page was not necessarily messy, but confusing at first. I went through each list and organized it in a way that I found best for understanding and accessibility. I added a source for "by Cause" because there weren't any clear causes in that section. To help identify the causes I added " Accidental injuries can come from falling or motor vehicle accidents ", while also linking accidental to Accident so that the reader could have the option to click on the Accident article. For "by Modality" I added another source for the information on strain, and sprain. Before this, there was no explanation of either so I included "Strain and repetitive strain are injuries to muscles or tendons. Sprain is an injury to a ligament ." as well as the injury "sprain" to the list. Under "modality" I conjoined a couple of the original sections into one, because they were very close to each other in terms of injury. While editing the "by Location" section, I decided that some of the injuries listed were irrelevant in terms of usefulness, and added them under "See Also". Along with this I reorganized this list so that the injuries listed beforehand fell into their own sections. This made the article easier to navigate and read.

Ancient Music:

This article need citations, and luckily I found the website that the information had been taken off of. Upon further review I noticed that not only had this article not been cited, but that it is completely plagiarized off of said article. I edited "Ancient China" so that it wasn't word for word what the original article had said and provided in text citations. I did this also for "Ancient Rome" as it was sourced from the same article as "Ancient China". Unfortunately I don't have enough time to edit the entire article so that it isn't plagiarized, but I hope the contributions I made will help.

ancient music
The music of ancient Rome borrowed heavily from the music of the cultures that were conquered by the empire, including music of Greece, Egypt, and Persia. Music was incorporated into many areas of Roman life including the military, entertainment in the Roman theater, religious ceremonies and practices, and "almost all public/civic occasions."[This quote needs a citation] -https://www.music-world.org/prehistoric-period

The philosopher-theorist Boethius translated into Latin and anthologized a number of Greek treatises, including some on music. His work The Principles of Music (better-known under the title De institutione musica) divided music into three types: Musica mundana (music of the universe), musica humana (music of human beings), and musica instrumentalis (instrumental music).

Legend has it that the qin, the most revered of all Chinese musical instruments, has a history of about 5,000 years. This legend states that the legendary figures of China's pre-history — Fuxi, Shennong and Huang Di, the "Yellow Emperor" — were involved in its creation. Nearly all qin books and tablature collections published prior to the twentieth century state this as the actual origins of the qin (Yin n.d., 1–10), although this is now viewed as mythology. It is mentioned in Chinese writings dating back nearly 3,000 years, and examples have been found in tombs from about 2,500 years ago. The exact origins of the qin is still a very much continuing subject of debate over the past few decades.

The qin or Guqin, dates back to around 5,000 years ago. Legend states that figures of China's pre-history, "Fuxi, Shennong and Huang Di, the "Yellow Emperor" — were involved in its creation". Most qin literature written before the twentieth century confirm that this is the origin of the qin, although now it is viewed as mythology. In Chinese literature the qin dates back almost 3,000 years, while examples of the instrument have been found in tombs that date back to about 2,000 years ago. Although the ancient literature states it's beginnings, the origin of the qin is still the subject of debate over the past few decades.

links to put in see also:

 * Crush injury
 * Needlestick injury
 * Penile strangulation
 * direct DNA damage
 * Biliary injury
 * Ventilator-associated lung injury
 * Transfusion-related acute lung injury
 * Asphyxia

Injury by Cause
Causes for injuries fall under two categories: intentional and accidental. Intentional injuries include acts of violence and war, or be self-imposed like suicide or self-harm. Accidental injuries can come from falling or motor vehicle accidents. Some cases of accidental injuries are injury by stingray or lightning injuries.

Injury by Modality

 * Trauma
 * Traumatic injuries are a body wound or shock produced by sudden physical collision or movement. Injuries associated with trauma are avulsion, bone fracture, injury by blast, internal bleeding and catastrophic injuries.
 * Strain, repetitive strain, or sprain
 * Strain and repetitive strain are injuries to muscles or tendons. Sprain is an injury to a ligament.
 * Toxins
 * Injury from toxin or as adverse effect of a pharmaceutical drug.
 * Other external or internal injuries
 * Other injuries can be from external causes, such as radiation, burn or frostbite. These injuries can include radiation-induced lung injury and microwave burn. Injuries from internal causes include reperfusion injury.

Injury by Location
Skin:


 * Wound, an injury in which skin is torn, cut or punctured (an open wound), or where blunt force trauma causes a contusion (a closed wound). In pathology, it specifically refers to a sharp injury which damages the dermis of the skin.

Head:


 * Head injury


 * Penetrating head injury
 * Closed head injury

Eyes:


 * Eye injury


 * Chemical eye injury


 * Eye injuries during general anaesthesia

Brain:


 * Brain injury
 * Acquired brain injury
 * Coup contrecoup injury
 * Diffuse axonal injury
 * Frontal lobe injury

Nerves:


 * Nerve injury
 * Spinal cord injury
 * Brachial plexus injury
 * Sciatic nerve injury
 * Injury of axillary nerve

Soft tissue, musculoskeletal and organs:


 * Soft tissue injury
 * Tracheobronchial injury
 * Acute kidney injury
 * Anterior cruciate ligament injury
 * Musculoskeletal injury
 * Articular cartilage injuries
 * Acute lung injury
 * Pancreatic injury
 * Thoracic aorta injury

Body:


 * Lisfranc injury
 * Knee injury
 * Medial knee injuries
 * Back injury
 * Hand injury
 * Chest injury
 * Asphyxia

by activity
Common activities that have a high risk of injury are:


 * sports
 * concussion
 * strain
 * shoulder injury
 * rock climbing
 * finger injury
 * knuckle injury
 * Lead climbing injuries


 * Reverse bite injury
 * Occupational injury
 * Ventilator-associated lung injury
 * Sea urchin injury
 * Illness and injuries during spaceflight

By activity[edit]

 * Reverse bite injury
 * Lead climbing injuries
 * Occupational injury
 * Ventilator-associated lung injury
 * Sea urchin injury
 * Transfusion-related acute lung injury
 * Illness and injuries during spaceflight