User:JordanChase06/Hybrid PAC/SRP1828 Peer Review

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Jordan did a good job of expanding on the sources provided and adding key information relevant to understanding Hybrid PACs. Information regarding the creation and purpose of the first source as well as key members were imperative to add because its purpose was to support Hillary Clinton/Obama. Therefore, it showed a democratic lean. In the next source, Jordan added information about the source further, stating again how it showed lots of support for Hillary Clinton and other information about what is is. He added more key members and notable actions which was imperative for understanding the source.