User:Jordanm12/Pascale Guiton/ACapper Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jordanm12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jordanm12/Pascale_Guiton?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A (article does not already exist)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Great lead! One main suggestion I have is to add more information about Dr. Guiton's education, career/research, and advocacy work. The Wikipedia lead is a great place to provide an overall summary of the person and the sections of your article, and I think adding more information here could benefit your lead!

Content

Wow, Dr. Guiton is amazing! Looking at your sources, are you able to add any more information about Dr. Guiton's personal life or what made her want to work towards receiving her doctorate? What organizations was she a part of during her education? Can you find more information about the impacts of her research? Adding more information to the "advocacy and social justice" sections would also be helpful!

Tone and Balance

Tone and balance are great throughout the article! I didn't notice any bias or un-cited statements. Great job!

Sources and References

You have lots of varied sources, that's great! Can you use more information from these sources to add more information about Dr. Guiton to your article? Also, one organization thing you can do to the "selected publications" section is to add a bullet point to each line. I also really like how you bolded Dr. Guiton's name in each publication! Another thing you could do is add more links to terms like "parisitology" and "California State University" and any other terms that a reader may not know off the top of their head.

Overall great job, Dr. Guiton is amazing, and is more than worthy of having a Wikipedia page! I'm sure she'll love her article :)