User:Jordanm12/Pascale Guiton/Ishira25 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jordanm12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jordanm12/Pascale Guiton
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jordanm12/Pascale_Guiton?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Same as above

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Lead
 * Your lead section is concise and to the point. It definitely highlights who she is. If possible, I'd definitely add a picture of her. I loved how you linked her website!
 * Also, I'm not sure why, but the "Contents" box appears to be missing in your lead section.
 * Content
 * You have lots of great information about her! It would be nice to have some details about her early life (such as where she grew up, etc.) if that is possible to find. All of your content definitely seems up to date.
 * It would be nice to have a little bit more information about her research. A suggestion would be to have a separate section regrading her research, which would help to focus on all of the amazing work that she's done.
 * Tone and Balance
 * You have an extremely neutral, unbiased tone. It is definitely to the point and sounds like a Wikipedia article.:)
 * Sources and References
 * You have definitely used diverse sources, including reliable secondary sources of information. The links that I checked definitely worked!
 * Organization
 * Your organization is very clear and easy to follow. I particularly appreciated your section on "Advocacy and Social Justice." If possible, I would add a few more sections such as the aforementioned separation of "Research." Additionally, if she has any awards, that might be nice to include.
 * Images and Media
 * There were no visuals included, so I'd definitely add a few to capture the researcher's attention. In addition to a picture of her, you could also add a picture of the parasite that she studies.
 * For New Articles Only
 * This article appears to meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements and a range of sources were used. This is extremely minor, but it might be helpful to link a few more key words to other Wikipedia articles, particularly under the "Advocacy and Social Justice" section.
 * Overall Impressions
 * Overall, this is a great article! Pascale Guiton is definitely an uncommon leader. I am so interested in her "Advocacy and Social Justice Work" and would love to know more if there is any additional information out there!