User:Jordansanicharan/Audio mixing (recorded music)/EyobKeflinkiel Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jordan Sanichran


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jordansanicharan/Audio_mixing_(recorded_music)?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
i thought this was a nice small addition. I cant really talk much about the lead section because there was not a lead section. The article addition was just content so maybe a way to improve it would be by adding a lead section. The overall tone of the article was that it was neutral it only tried to give you information in this case it was about acoustics in a room. the citations are good inside the content when using information from a source the source was properly cited. The citation themselves from an initial read look like they are from academic places. The organization was good the content was well written, easy to understand, and  clear and concise. There was one image used and because it was original content by the writer the image does adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations.