User:Jordansanicharan/Audio mixing (recorded music)/Kachina123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jordansanicharan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jordansanicharan/Audio_mixing_(recorded_music)?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Audio mixing (recorded music)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content in this drafted section is relevant, and adds value to the original article. Some sentences are awkward and grammatical errors were noted. The first sentence of the section is not neutral and the claim is not referenced. The photo used is appropriate to context of the draft, and most sources provided are verifiable. Overall, the draft is relevant and appropriate; grammatical and referencing improvements could further strengthen this entry.