User:Jordanshie/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Free Breakfast for Children

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article because I am interested in the program and its history. It was founded by an important group and has historical significance. I would like to add more to this page because it is very short and has very little recent information.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The lead section is easy to understand, but could be stronger. It is vague and does not have as much information about the program as it should.

The content lack much of the historical context that it should include. The page is very short and needs more information.

Tone and balance needs to include more from other sources and points of view. It is very centered on the Black Panthers view and lacks information from other sources.

There are only two sources. Both seem to be in support of the Black Panther party. There needs to be information from other sources to not create a bias.

There are no images or media.

There are many discussions on the talk page. Most users agree that the information is bias and needs to include a better, more detailed history section.

The article needs more information from various non biased sources.

Feedback from Instructor
Nice start! A few points:

What, specifically, do you think is biased about the article? The article is intended to be about a Black Panther Party program, so it should focus on them. The discussion on bias on the Talk page is also more complex that what you relay here.

What kind of historical context do you think needs to be added?

Please note that another student (Saguaro123) also evaluated the same article, but only one of you can work on this article for you main class project going forward. You can see what they wrote, and my responses, in their sandbox. Saguaro23 (talk) 18:07, 6 September 2021 (UTC)