User:Jordanshie/Free Breakfast for Children/Papilio Charontis Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jordanshie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jordanshie/Free_Breakfast_for_Children?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Free Breakfast for Children

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Nothing there yet. I'm sure you have an idea of where you want to go with this, considering the references present.

Body

Nothing there yet, but you have enough sources to draw from. Make sure to go into detail about what you're deciding to edit, but don't feel the necessity to force things into the article if they don't need to be there! Historically political commentary can be complex, so take your time when evaluating what actually needs to be told about the BPP and the Free Breakfast for School Children Program.

References

There is an ample amount of sources here! Five sources already is impressive, three of them being from academic journals makes it even better. There's no link to these though, so be sure to add those in once you insert them into the article itself. I like the range of time between your sources too, going from 2008 to 2017. Feel free to add in something even more recent, if there is something accessible and relevant to you.

To Sum It Up

''I'm jealous of how many references you have, don't waste the golden opportunity to properly utilize them! You got this!''