User:Jording/Marion C. Martinez/UCLA PH Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jording


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jording/Marion_C._Martinez?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
You should first of all make the "biography","references","art/notable works" and "external links" headings. Also make your reference links actual links so people could just click on them. Consider adding wikilinks and footnotes. Also find out the artist's birth date:)). Also consider talking more and polishing this part, "Before she started making the artwork she makes now, she started off by just making jewelry. Aside from creating her artwork, Marion also gives presentations to young people and art professionals."