User:Jorgee829/Sleepy Lagoon Murder/Lorozco3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) jorgee829


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jorgee829/Sleepy_Lagoon_Murder?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead needs work, add like an introduction of the topic

Good job on keeping it neutral and to the point.

More background and detail needed on the incident itself like dates and social implications of zoot suit riots. Avoid vague terms like "many people" (state what people), rumors (from where or who?). Explain acronyms like SLDC.

Good headings and sub titles

references and sources need to be added and articles must be linked

Article is not complete but going on the right track if more content is added