User:JoronwannaE/Angel Rich/JaidenLMcK Peer Review

General info
JorowannaE
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:JoronwannaE/Angel Rich
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User:JoronwannaE/Angel Rich

Evaluate the drafted changes
Citations and grammatical errors were corrected.