User:Josage18/Ezili Dantor/Cjsando Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Josage18


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User: Josage18/Ezili Dantor/Bibliography - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Editing User: Josage18/Ezili Dantor - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading User: Josage18 article i am pleased to say i found it very easy and entertaining to read. before reading your article, I didn't know who Ezili Danto, or Ezili Danto' was. the only thing i would like to see changed is the amount of information. I would like to know more behind this goddess. I think the amount and the strength of the content could be more in depth. Maybe try to find one more reference. besides that, I thought it was very good. Everything was up to date and researched.