User:Joseph.C99/User:Neidagarcia/Courtney M. Leonard/Joseph.C99 Peer Review

General info
Neidagarcia
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://w.wiki/9qK3

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

 * https://w.wiki/9qJt

Evaluate the drafted changes
Yes the lead reflects information uploaded.

Yes the introductory is focused on the person.

The lead gives brief overview of the artist and example of art.

The lead is a good intro to the artist and strait to the point.

Yes the content that has been added is relevant.

The content looks up to date.

The content that is missing would be the 3 art works of the person and their description.

The topic is on a native american artist so yes it does help with the equality gaps.

The content seems to be neutral all though there is a source that is the artist them selves talking about their practice.

There are no heavily bias claims about the artist.

The view points stay neutral.

The information comes mainly from articles written about the artist.

The content does reflect the sources.

The sources are current.

They had very few sources with smaller articles, there were other sites with some information not in the article such as https://www.stolaf.edu/profile/leonar9/ which is the biography from the school she works at. There were also websites that showed and gave description of her works.

All links work.

The content is clear and easy to read.

The content is broken down into navigable sections.

The image added would have been better under the art works tab with an explanation of the piece.

Image is not captioned.

Image is placed in a appealing way.

The content of the article has greatly improved the topic and has given much more information than was there before. Yet there are areas that are lacking such as the addition of three art works as well as awards of the artist.

The strengths that were added would be the list of the exhibitions the artist has been apart of as well as the published works they have had as this makes up the most of the content of the article.

I believe the content can be improved with the addition of the missing information of art works and awards and well as expansion of the main content and addition to the already existing content. As well as the linking to other Wikipedia content that is mentioned. With a few more sources It looks like this article can be expanded even more. Also Bio says she is filmmaker but there is no information on this in the article, expand this as well.