User:Joseph.r.wollard/Marcos de Niza/StarmanDeMarte Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Joseph.r.wollard


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Joseph.r.wollard/Marcos_de_Niza?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Marcos de Niza

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content is broken down into sections the sections could be organized better and the article is easy to read, all the information is relevant. It provides enough information and the sources seem reliable and the stance is neutral. The article is very good but it could use some polish, perhaps more information on de Niza and other events in his life.