User:JosephineHriscu/Esther Brandeau/Andrew-Hartman-1 Peer Review

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I really liked your lead in the article as the background tells of both the wider context of Jews in both Europe and the Colonies of Europe. This context and information provides the reader with an adequate sense of Esther's story early on in the article. I suppose a greater expansion into Esther Brandeau's beginnings and historical significance is coming, and such an expansion will introduce the topic better and will be more readable/palatable for an entry reader. The article provides plenty of information and remains neutral, though attention must be made as to ensure neutrality as more personal information is added. A decent number of sources are already present so great deal more sources are not entirely necessary for the article as it sits now.